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5 Apr

After visiting our bush backyard last week Room 16 decided to write some senses poems. We planned using a W chart included our five senses: touch, sight, sound, taste, smell. We hope you like our poems.

The Bush Walk

By Stanislav M


I saw little birds flying and rustling plants blooming

I heard leaves whispering and excitement in the air

I smelt fresh plants and smelly mushrooms

I tasted fresh air and the excitement

I felt soft plants and hard rocks.


The scary walk

By Prinisha

I saw sharp, long silver ferns and squawking birds

I felt cold and smooth leaves and wrinkly tree bark

I heard tall talking trees and buzzing cicadas

I tasted fresh flower air

I smelt dog poo and fresh plants.


The amazing bush walk

By Logan

I saw long silver ferns and the medium paced river

I tasted the fresh air and water splashing up

I heard singing moreporks and chirping birds

I smelt fresh plants and amazing mushrooms

I felt leaves hitting me on the arm.

2 comments:

  1. Lovely descriptions in your poems Logan, Prinisha and Stani. It was a lovely experience walking through the bush!

  1. What great descriptions. Your poem really brings your experiences on the walk alive. Well done.

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