After visiting our bush backyard last week Room 16 decided to write some senses poems. We planned using a W chart included our five senses: touch, sight, sound, taste, smell. We hope you like our poems.
The Bush Walk
By Stanislav M
I saw little birds flying and rustling plants blooming
I heard leaves whispering and excitement in the air
I smelt fresh plants and smelly mushrooms
I tasted fresh air and the excitement
I felt soft plants and hard rocks.
The scary walk
By Prinisha
I saw sharp, long silver ferns and squawking birds
I felt cold and smooth leaves and wrinkly tree bark
I heard tall talking trees and buzzing cicadas
I tasted fresh flower air
I smelt dog poo and fresh plants.
The amazing bush walk
By Logan
I saw long silver ferns and the medium paced river
I tasted the fresh air and water splashing up
I heard singing moreporks and chirping birds
I smelt fresh plants and amazing mushrooms
I felt leaves hitting me on the arm.
April 11, 2011 at 11:55 PM
Lovely descriptions in your poems Logan, Prinisha and Stani. It was a lovely experience walking through the bush!